
Once a little girl, she called Maria and she liked painted very much. By the time she was six years, she always painted. In the school, in her house in everywhere! That was incredible!
She painted a lot of pictures, her mother didn't pay atention to Maria, and she was very sad. One day, she decided painted her house's facade with the balcony, the door and the clothesline. Her mother said her that this picture was horrible and she hadn't painted it very well. Maria hate her mother because she never help her and either backing her. But Maria never surrendered and she continued painting and such as her mother didn't like the picture, Maria decided keeped everything. After twenty years Maria moved out with her new husband to a new house. She gathered everything, she found all pictures that she had painted a years ago. Her husband saw this pictures and he liked it very much, he decided showed to everybody. And then the people like it too. And today this picture is very important and it was in an important museum. Maria was very proud and her mother very sorry with her.
And now Maria is famous!!

Once THERE WAS a little girl(, she) called Maria and she liked paintING very much. By the time she was six years, she WAS always paintING. (In the) AT school, (in her house) AT HOME, ( in) everywhere! (That) IT was incredible!
ResponderEliminarShe painted a lot of pictures BUT her mother didn't pay atention to Maria, and she was very sad. One day, she decided TO PAINT (painted) her house's facade with (the) A balcony, (the) door and (the) clothesline. Her mother said her that this picture was horrible and she hadn't painted it very well. Maria hateD her mother because she never helpED her (and either) OR backED her. But Maria never (surrendered) GAVE UP and she continued painting and (such as) EVEN THOUGH her mother didn't like the picture, Maria decided (keeped) TO KEEP everything. After twenty years Maria moved out with her new husband to a new house. She gathered everything, she found all pictures that she had painted (a) years ago. Her husband saw thESE pictures and he liked THEM very much, he decided TO SHOW (showed) THEM to everybody. And then the people like (it) THEM too. And today this picture is very important and it (was) IS in an important museum. Maria (was) IS very proud and her mother IS very (sorry with her) SAD.
And now Maria is famous!!
GOOD WORK! I'M NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN BY "her mother very sorry with her". I WROTE "sad" BUT PERHAPS THAT IS NOT WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY.